Hi Mekeyah,

Wow this piece was great! I really liked how you broke down your thought process and used your personal experience to connect with the user.

It blew my mind when you presented the Google research because talk about above and beyond!

Also the Figma design :O

I'm still new to the design world so I hope to get on your level some day.

However, one thing I felt like your copy was missing was the personal connection to the user. I felt that your copy highlights the features more than connects the features to the user's needs.

Ex: Sure I can get all these cool event reminders and highlight reels, but can I only see them when the game is on? What if I'm at work or too busy with the kids during the game? Can I see them after?

Just some thoughts that I have. But this was a great read overall!